帮我检查一下这篇英语的稿子有没有问题,我口语考试要用谢谢拉.IhaveasisternamedYuanJianShuo.Sheisasweetgirl,7yearsold.In2009,whenshewas5yearsold.Iaskedher:"what'stheanswerabout1plus1?Shecounte

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帮我检查一下这篇英语的稿子有没有问题, 我口语考试要用 谢谢拉.
I have a sister named YuanJianShuo .She is a sweet girl ,7 years old .In 2009,when she was 5 years old .I asked her :"what's the answer about 1 plus 1 ?She counted the fingers and answer: two. And then i asked : how about 10 plus 10 ?She counted all her fingers and toes.My mother and i laughed She is really interesting.

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意思都表达得很好,就是太中文化了,建议多用几个高级句式