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帮我看看这段英语我们英语课前十分钟要演讲.帮我看看这段话有木有错吧?或者有没有需要改进?Goodmorningeverybody,It'sreallymyhonortobehere.todayi'lltalkaboutalittlestory.bequiet,andlistencarefullypl

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帮我看看这段英语
我们英语课前十分钟要演讲.帮我看看这段话有木有错吧?或者有没有需要改进?
Good morning everybody,It's really my honor to be here.today i'll talk about a little story.be quiet,and listen carefully please.
A monkey and a cat went to the cinema last week.They had a big breakfast.They went there by bus.But when they got there,they were really disappointed——There were no more ticket for the film they wanted to see!They had a good idea:They went to the home of rabbit,and play with the rabbit.But rabbit’s mum doesn’t let them to play,because rabbit’s mum just cleaned the room.Oh!What a terrible day!The cat and the monkey can’t play today,they are crying now.
So much for this ,thank you!
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Good morning everybody,It's really my great honor to be here to give
you all a little story today.Now please be quiet and listen to it carefully .
A monkey and a cat went to the cinema last week.They had a big breakfast.They went there by bus.But when they got there,they were really disappointed——There were no more ticket for the film they wanted to see!They had a good idea:They went to the home of rabbit,and played with the rabbit.But rabbit’s mum didn’t let them to play,because her just cleaned the room.Oh!What a terrible day!The cat and the monkey can’t play today,they are crying now.
So much for this ,thank you!
恩恩.语法是没什么问题了.不过这个故事没什么意思啊,建议换个.希望对你有所帮助
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