一篇简单的文章HowtoCookOrientalRiceDuringthepresenttime,moreandmoreAsiancometotheU.S.Ifyouwanttoeatorientalrice,youhavetoknowhowtocookit.WhenIlivedinChina,sometimesIcookriceformyfamily.Letmetellyo

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一篇简单的文章
How to Cook Oriental Rice
During the present time, more and more Asian come to the U.S. If you want to eat oriental rice, you have to know how to cook it. When I lived in China, sometimes I cook rice for my family. Let me tell you how to cook it. After you cook, you need buy a boiler, a bowl and some rice, if you have not. First, you have to clean the boiler and bowl. Second, please put two cups rice in your bowl. Third you need use clean water to wash rice carefully. Then please put 1/5 water into boiler. After that, you need put the bowl into the boiler. Then you need make sure the lid is on and put it on the stove. Finally turn on the stove. OK, please wait 40 minutes. The rice is making good. If you know how to cook Chinese food, these will be a delicious lunch. I think these are a good way to make rice.
请大家帮我看下有没有什么错误,like Grammar,spell etc.
我自己写的

Answer 1

during the present time语法不对,直接用currently比较好.
you need buy a boiler,need后面应该加to,need to do something.后面也有相同的错误自己改一下.
the lid is on在英语中是一句俚语,意思是事情到了忍无可忍的地步,用了可能会让老外误解,最好用make sure that the boiler is covered.
最后一句these will be a delicious lunch. I think these are a good way to make rice. these是复数,后面用a显然不对,都改成this.