请帮忙把下面的英语小短文挑出错误并提出改正意见itisagoodplaceforstudentstostudyandlive.Myidealschoolhasabigplayground,adinninghall,aswimmingpoolandalibrary.Itstartsat8a.mandfinishesat4p.m.Students

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请帮忙把下面的英语小短文挑出错误并提出改正意见
it is a good place for students to study and live.My ideal school has a big playground,a dinning hall,a swimming pool and a library.
It starts at 8a.m and finishes at 4p.m .Students can have more time to do after-school activities.They can enjoy themselves in my ideal school.
At 8:30a.m they have their first lesson.Students can study many lessons in this school such as Chinese,English,math,P.E,art,music.
They eat lunch at 12.During lunchtime they can listen to pop music,chat with each other and eat meals in the big dinning hall.
And they can read some books in the library.They may not come to the library often but they can always have wonderful time there.The library also has lots of books.
Student in my ideal school can do more exercise every,so my ideal school has a swimming pool and a big playground.I think student can love it.
Do you know anything about my ideal school?If you have good advices please tell me.
请提出改正意见并给出正确的句子

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Do you know anything about my ideal school? If you have good advices please tell me.
Thank you.这句错了