检查下我的值日报告Helloeveryone,iamLY,todayiamonduty.andfirstiamgraduatedfromgaoxinhighschool.ilikeEnglishbeceasenotonlydoilikeBritan,butalsoithinkuseittocommunicatewithforiengersisakindofart.ialso

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检查下我的值日报告 Hello everyone ,i am LY ,today i am on duty.and first
i am graduated from gaoxin high school .i like English becease not only do i like Britan,but also i think use it to communicate with foriengers is a kind of art.i also like history and chinese.But i am not good in Math and PE.So i have a litte bad heath.As for my hobbies,i like play computer games and see English movies.such as Harry Potter ,avata,and inception.to my way of thiking 《seeing these movies can promote my level of English listening and help me konw the culture of western,and gain more knowledge.
and last 〈about my english levei ,i think ,now ,i am lack of vacabulary,which made me can not communicate easily with others.but i will make my best to promote it,and i hope we can eatablish a good friendship in the next 3 years.so,this is my today’s duty report ,thank you everyone.

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1:I am graduated 去掉 am 不然就成了被动意思.2：because 去掉,because和not only ……but also 都是连词,不能一起用的.3:foriengers is a kind of art 这句错了.i think use it to communicate with foriengers 已...