求英语改错,下面的句子感觉很不顺,但有不知道怎么改.1:AsiantendtogivelowerhelpqualitythannotAsian;2:Forpeoplelessthan16yearsinschool,thehelpqualityoffemalestendstobehigherthanmales.However,forpeoplemore

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求英语改错,下面的句子感觉很不顺,但有不知道怎么改.
1:Asian tend to give lower help quality than not Asian;
2:For people less than 16 years in school,the help quality of females tends to be higher than males.However,for people more than 16 years,this difference is not significant.
3:The help quality tends to increase with years in school increasing.
4:The higher self-efficacy we feel,the higher of help quality we give.
the data is collected in other countries ,because of the difference of culture ,it is harmful for us to describe and analyze

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改动的地方我用括号括起来了1.Asian tend(s) to give lower help quality than not Asian2:For people less than 16 years in school,the help quality of females tend(s) to be higher than males.However,for peo...