请英语好的人帮忙看一下,急用,DearSirorMadam,Iamwritingthislettertocomplainaboutmyroom-mate.Andrequesthaveanewroomfornextterm.Asyouknowthatwearesharingoneroomtogether,Ifeelverydifficulttoworkthere,because

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请英语好的人帮忙看一下,急用,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about my room-mate.And request have a new room for next term.
As you know that we are sharing one room together,I feel very difficult to work there,because my room-mate always has friends visiting especially for night time which they turn on the radio very loudly .and dancing in the room.and he often invite him friends to join a party in my room which ends of o’clock in the morning.Even borrows my cup without asking .it is very impolite.
I am sorry to say that I can not study in this room any more .especially I will have an important exam in the following year.so I have to study hard.I would be grateful if I could have my own room next term.
I am looking forward to hear from you soon.
Your sincerely

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Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing this letter to say something about my roommate and request to have a new room next term.As you know we are sharing one room together,I feel very difficult to study there...