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我写的这句话有错吗Theprojectweinvestisatechnologicalitemnamed“CarBearty”,who’sdevelopmentisbasedonthetraditionalcarmaintaining,andmaketheconventionalcarbeovershadowedandtooinferiortobearcomparisonontheu

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我写的这句话有错吗
The project we invest is a technological item named “Car Bearty”,who’s development is based on the traditional car maintaining,and make the conventional car be overshadowed and too inferior to bear comparison on the utilizing of new material as well as technology.
我写的这句话有错吗?
好像用who's 有些别扭~而且有一些地方需要改进的~



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The project we invest in is a technological program named “Car Beauty”.Based on the traditional car maintainace,it is developed with new material and new technique,leaving the traditional one too inferior to bear comparison.
不过这里too inferior to bear comparison用的有点生硬~