英语这样写可以吗?这是我对小飞侠的一个小简介.请大家帮我看看语句有没有不通顺什么的.PeterlosthisshadowinWendy'shome.Then.HegoestoWendy'shomewithfairyforlookingforashadow.Overthere.Wendyhelpshim

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英语 这样写可以吗?
这是我对小飞侠的一个小简介.请大家帮我看看语句有没有不通顺什么的.
Peter lost his shadow in Wendy's home.
Then.He goes to Wendy's home with fairy for looking for a shadow.
Over there.Wendy helps him to sew the shadow on.
Finally,Peter Wendy and Wendy's tow younger brother flying to
Neverland.

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粗看到的错误Peter lost his shadow in Wendy's home.Then.He goes（应该也用过去时吧） to Wendy's home with fairy for looking for a shadow.Over there.Wendy helps（改过去时） him to sew the shadow on.Final...