这是一篇介绍河北省的两分钟ppt英语演讲稿,希望英语高手们可以帮忙修改一下其中的语法错误,感激不尽.Hello!Everyone.Letmeintroducemyhometowntoyou.(翻页)IcamefromHebeiprovince.HebeiprovincesurroundsB

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这是一篇介绍河北省的两分钟ppt英语演讲稿,希望英语高手们可以帮忙修改一下其中的语法错误,感激不尽.
Hello!Everyone.Let me introduce my hometown to you.(翻页)I came from Hebei province.Hebei province surrounds Beijing,besides Shandong province and Shandong province.The Provincial capital of Hebei province is Shijiazhuang.And I’m living there.(翻页)Then let’s see a poem phrase.It described two kinds of the beauties in this world .This word is the brief name of Hebei.And This picture is present of the beautiful view in the first half sentence of this poem phrase.(翻页)Look at this picture!This is the picture of the provincial flower of Hebei .It’s a kind of Philadelphus.(翻页)Then let me introduce many places of historic interest in Hebei to you.(翻页)There is a picture of Zhaozhou Bridge.Zhaozhou bridge is located in Zhaoxian county.This bridge was build in Sui Dynasty when between now about one thousand and five hundred years ago that It’s the first stone arch bridge in the world.(翻页)And this is the picture of Chengde Imperial Summer Resort .It’s the place where Qing emperors worked and relaxed in summer three hundred years ago.But today it’s a good place for people who likes touring.(翻页)Then look at this picture.It’s the picture of The west mausoleum of the Qing Emperor .There are many Qing Emperors burried in there(翻页).And there are also many places of scenic beauty in Hebei.(翻页)For example,Bashang grassland(翻页),Mulan hunting ground (翻页),and JIULONG Mountain natural scenic spot.we can see all kinds of beauties in different seasons and different places there.(翻页)Finally ,there are many famous historic people in Hebei.For example,the general named Zhaoyun in Three Kingdoms period.(翻页)The writter of Dream of the red chamber Caoxueqin (翻页).The editor of imperial collection of four Jixiaolan.(翻页)They are all well-known in Chinese history.That’s all.Thank you for watching.（完）

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1:beside是介词不加S,加了后意思就不对了,先把S去掉.可以改为：.Beijing and it is adjacent to shandong province.2：第三句中的province可以不要了,太累赘.and i am living there 可以改为 where i am living紧接...