英语情诗..坐等英语帝下面是原文:想要传达的只有一件事,那就是对你的爱大于世界,大于自己..停止不下和你再次相见的激动想要见到你,接触你..想要感觉你的全部,是的,我已经陷入爱河略带

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英语情诗..坐等英语帝
下面是原文:
想要传达的只有一件事,
那就是对你的爱大于世界,大于自己..
停止不下和你再次相见的激动
想要见到你,接触你..
想要感觉你的全部,
是的,我已经陷入爱河
略带痛苦,但却甜美的梦,
即使这样也要感谢与你的相识
神啊,
一次也好
向那个人传达我的爱,
天空啊,风啊,
请传送这份爱吧
我是这样爱你..pellona.
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翻译成了:
The only thing,
I want you to know about me,
is that I love you more than the world and myself,
and can't stop the excitement of our next date.
I 'm eager meeting you,touching you to feel everything about you
Yes,I've fallen deeply in love,
It's a sweet dream mixed with a little sadness,
yet,I thank god for knowing you,
just once,
send my love to you,
may sky and wind be my messengers,
this is how much I feel for you...pellona.
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求纠正.改良.

Answer 1

The one and only thing
that I want you to know,
is that,
my love for you
is more than the world,
is more than myself...
Cannot quench the fire
the hunger to see you again
The desire to see you,
to touch you,
to be able to feel the entirety of you,
Yes,
I'm drowning in the river of love,
With slight pain,
but a most sweet dream,
Ever still,
I am ever grateful
just to know you.
Dear God,
just for once
please send my love to you.
Maybe the sky and the wind,
could send my love to you.
I love you so...
pellona
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