这段话的语法错误.HILucy!YourmumhastoldmeaboutyouandyourtwinsisterHannah.Ithinkthatint'sagoodthingtohaveasisterwhoisthesameageasyou.Youcansharethefeelingsofsadness,happinessorevenfear.Iusedtostudyina

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这段话的语法错误.
HI Lucy!
Your mum has told me about you and your twin sister Hannah.I think that int's a good thing to have a sister who is the same age as you.You can share the feelings of sadness,happiness or even fear.
I used to study in a Chinese public school.Be honest,I didn't like my school.I dislike the educational style of Chinese schools.students get too much pressure.Luckily,I changed my school to Harrow.Harrow is a British school.I feel better being with foreign teachers although Harrow isn't as good as I expected.
Are you at work now?What's your job?Did you like your school?
Bye
Victoria

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int's改为is
or even fear改为and even
Be honest改为to be honest
I didn't like my school.改为I don't like my school.
students get too much pressure.中students 首字母大写
Did you like your school?改为Do you like your school?
Bye改为Sincerely(书信格式）
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