英语翻译这是在先翻译的,俄国发动克里米亚战争企图转移国内视线,但事与愿违,俄国失败了,也因此带来了一系列的问题.财政陷入危机,国内经济状况也十分恶劣,农奴制更是危机重重,各种要

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这是在先翻译的,
俄国发动克里米亚战争企图转移国内视线,但事与愿违,俄国失败了,也因此带来了一系列的问题.财政陷入危机,国内经济状况也十分恶劣,农奴制更是危机重重,各种要求改变现状和思考俄国未来发展道路的派别和人物出现,引导反农奴制舆论的形成.俄国沙皇在看到战争中出现的装备和技术和制度尤其是农奴制的落后之后也开始思考要做点什么来改变一下现状,用以缓解并最终解决国内出现的各种矛盾.同时国内的开明官僚尤其是自由派官僚也认识到了必须改革农奴制才能解决国内的日益恶劣的社会形势.因此俄国沙皇在这些因素的压力面前,最终采取了自上而下的1861年改革.可以说,克里米亚战争对1861年改革起到了十分重要的作用,我们可以认为这次战争引发了俄国1861年改革.
Russia launched an attempt to shift the Crimean War the domestic line of sight,but it did not,Russia has failed,and thus brought a series of problems.Financial crisis,domestic economic conditions are very poor,serf system is crisis-ridden,change the status quo and thinking demands the future development of the Russian factions and characters appear the road to guide the formation of public opinion against serfdom.Russian Tsar appeared in that war,equipment and technology and systems,especially after the backward serfdom also want to do something to start thinking about a change of status quo,to alleviate and eventually resolve the domestic situation of the various contradictions.At the same time enlightened bureaucracy,especially the domestic liberal bureaucrats also recognized the need to reform the system of serfdom to solve domestic social situation deteriorating.Therefore,the Russian tsar in the face of pressure from these factors,and ultimately adopted a top-down reform in 1861.Can be said that the Crimean War in 1861,the reform has played a very important role,we can think of the war led to reforms in Russia in 1861.

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Nice try.而且你也很有 自知之明.且为你逐字逐句修改,已经没有任何错误了.希望你能对照学习.请加分.Russia launched the Crimean War in an attempt to divert the domestic attention.But contrary to its will,Rus...