求用英语写的评语评价他人的表演好坏,提出建议比如他的表演很精彩但最好大声一点.他最好能脱稿稿子写地很好表演生动注意不要用翻译器翻的,要没语法错误

Question

求用英语写的评语
评价他人的表演好坏,提出建议
比如
他的表演很精彩但最好大声一点.
他最好能脱稿
稿子写地很好
表演生动
注意不要用翻译器翻的,要没语法错误

Answer 1

He has done a great job,but please speak a little louder.
He'd better perform without his draft.
The draft was well-written.
He acted vividly.
He was a excellent performer,except for some small pronouncation mistakes.
His performance defines what acting is really about.
If you acted more relaxed,you would have done a greater job.
More action and less words will be better.
The lines of the performers' is not coherent.