我写了一封英文邮件,麻烦大家帮我看看是不是正确?不妥处请帮助改正.中文内容是：很高兴收到你的邮件,抱歉回复你有点晚,因为最近在北京和上海事情太多一直非常忙,我刚刚回到北京.我是

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我写了一封英文邮件,麻烦大家帮我看看是不是正确?不妥处请帮助改正.
中文内容是：很高兴收到你的邮件,抱歉回复你有点晚,因为最近在北京和上海事情太多一直非常忙,我刚刚回到北京.我是这样想的,现在希望你能告诉我你已经预定的酒店是哪几个?如果你不能预定酒店,我想我们可以下次再说,因为从现在的时间来看,我们能去日本的时间只有8月.I am glad to hear from you and very sorry to reply you late,because these days the Beijing things and Shanghai things tied me up.I just came back Beijing.I am considering that could u tell me the specific names of hotel u already put in place ,if u can not book the hotel.we can consider this tour next time,cos according to schedule,We may be only available on ,August,2012.

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I am glad to receive your letter.I am sorry to say that I can not reply you as soon as possible.
Because I am busy in tackling problem of Beijing and Shanghai..I just came back to Beijing.As far as I am concern,I hope you can tell me which hotel did you reserve now.If you can not ,we can put it aside.For according to schedule,we can go to Japan only in August.
以上是我的翻译,