请问下面这段英语短文有病句吗?有的话请老师指出.WhoKnowsmyfavoritecolor?WhoknowstheweatherIlike?Whoknowswhatiliketodo?WhoKnowswhichmusicilike?Whowillneverleaveme?Whoknowsmeafterthehiddensmilehurt?Who

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请问下面这段英语短文有病句吗?有的话请老师指出.
Who Knows my favorite color?Who knows the weather I like?Who knows what i like to do?Who Knows which music i like?Who will never leave me?Who knows me after the hidden smile hurt?Who knows how lonely i am in my world?Who knows how frighted i am when i walk in the darkness?If you can't do understand me,please don't look for me,at the Styx,the boats and other shore blossom,blood is flowing...Who am I don't konw…
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Answer 1

Who Knows which music i like => Who knows what music i like
Who knows me after the hidden smile hurt? => 这句话是什么意思?不过一定有语病.
Who knows how frighted i am when i walk in the darkness? => Who knows how frightened I am when I walk in the darkness?
If you can't do understand me => If you can't understand me
other shore blossom => red spider lily 或 manjusaka