请根据以下提示，结合事例，写一篇英语短文。Ifyourlifefeelslikeitislackingthepoweryouwantandthemotivationyouneedsometimesallyouhavetodoischangeyourpointofview.注意：无须写标题，

Question

请根据以下提示，结合事例，写一篇英语短文。

If your life feels like it is lacking the power you want and the motivation you need sometimes all you have to do is change your point of view.

注意：

无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

除诗歌外，文体不限；

文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称

词数120词左右。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Life is never what you have expected. Some day you might be stuck in a dilemma where you lack the power you want and the motivation you need in which case it is high time you should shift your point of view.Take myself for example there was a time when I moved into another school. Not fitting in with the new environment I didn’t dare to talk with the others let alone get on well with them. However one of my classmates came to my aid inviting me to join their study club. Not until then did I realize I could have adapted to the new surroundings if I had changed my point of view earlier.Without properly shifting your views the flowers of success won’t blossom. So change your point of view right now!

分 析：
考查议论类书面表达。题文大意：如果你的生活感觉缺少了动力，那么有时候你需要改变一下你的观点。题文已经给出了议论的中心，故考生需要抓住这个主题展开，需要写出支持这个论点的论据。切不可抄袭英语提示。亮点
分析：
本文结构清晰。首先开篇点题，第二段给出论据，第三段再次重申主题。本文用来许多好的句型，比如表语从句Life is never what you have expected.，非限制性定语从句lack the power you.. in which case it is high time you should shift your point of view.，it’s high time结构的使用，not until的倒装句Not until then did I realize I could have adapted to the new surroundings if I had changed my point of view earlier.等，可见考生基本功的扎实。本文亦有许多好的短语，比如：be stuck in，dare to，adapted to。这些好的短语体现了考生的丰厚积累。
考点：
考查议论类书面表达