高考英语作文请评分。题目：Myteachers（以下为我写的）不算概括20分满分请评分要求：(1)教师节迎来，表达你对老师的贺词(2)你老师帮助你的一次经历(3)120字左右Myteachersareth

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高考英语作文请评分。
题目：My teachers（以下为我写的） 不算概括20分满分 请评分
要求：(1)教师节迎来，表达你对老师的贺词
(2)你老师帮助你的一次经历
(3)120字左右
My teachers are the harbour of my soul and the oasis of my heart,who safeguarded me whenever something bad happened and emboldened me when I was discouraged.It was my teachers who lightened my heart and lent their hands to me when I was drowned in setbacks .
Memory has never faded out in my mind.Time flashed back to a day when I lagged behind others in math.It was my teachers who wiped off my puzzle in math and encouraged me without any hesitation.As a result,I made great progress.
From my perspectives,words fail to convey my gratitude to my teachers.Were it not for them,I would not be what I am today.My dearest teachers ,if you are the light,I will be the shdow.I'll make you see the seeds you pick up blossom.

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