请帮我看一下这一封给国外客户的跟进邮件写得怎么样？欢迎提出修改意见Hi***,How'syourSpringFestivalholiday?Wishyousuccessinyourcareerandhappinessofyourfamily!Weareinreceiptofyourinquiryabout***da

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请帮我看一下这一封给国外客户的跟进邮件写得怎么样？欢迎提出修改意见
Hi ***,
How's your Spring Festival holiday? Wish you success in your career and happiness of your family!
We are in receipt of your inquiry about *** dated Feb, 4th. and then I quoted you the price on Feb, 8th.
It'll be much appreciated if you got any feedback for us. We look forward to every opportunity to establish business relationship with you.
Best Regards,

Answer 1

1、如果对方不是东南亚国家的客户，可以不写春节过的怎么样，后面一句话也多余；简单的写就是How are you或者干脆不写；
2、We had received your inquiry **** and quoted you on ****;
3、It'll be much appreciated if you can give us feedback about quotation.后面一句话可以保留。