这个句子是我们外教写的,我觉得trying这里有问题,他说没有,Awoman,cominghurriedlydownthestairs,hasalsonoticedwhatisabouttohappenandtryingquicklytowarnhim,theicecreamlandsontheman’sheadbeforeshecangeta

Question

这个句子是我们外教写的,我觉得trying这里有问题,他说没有,
A woman,coming hurriedly down the stairs,has also noticed what is about to happen and trying quickly to warn him,the icecream lands on the man’s head before she can get all her words out.

Answer 1

这句话语法有问题
and 后面trying错误
the icecream 前面逗号使句子有两个谓语,错误
建议这么改
A woman comes hurriedly downstairs,noticing what is about to happen and trying quickly to warn the man.Unfortunately,the icecream lands on the man’s head before she can get all her words out.