十万火急,求求大哥哥大姐姐帮帮忙吧!我写了一篇英语作文,请求为我取一个名字（一定要是At……地方,总之是以At开头的）真的很感谢!IhaveanaughtybrothernamedTommyChen.Heistenyearsoldandhestud

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十万火急,求求大哥哥大姐姐帮帮忙吧!
我写了一篇英语作文,请求为我取一个名字（一定要是At……地方,总之是以At开头的）真的很感谢!
I have a naughty brother named Tommy Chen.He is ten years old and he studied in Class one Grade three.Tommy hated school and he always plan to don’t go to school,so his school record is not very fine.
If he sneezed,he asked his mother to write a note said that he had a cold.If he had a headache,he asked his mother to take him to the doctor during school times.He spent more time at home than he did at school.On the days he did go to school,he looked for excuses to come home early at once.
One day he came home from school in the middle of the morning.His father was very surprised.
“Why do you come home so early?” he said.“Is the school closed today?”
“No Dad,It’s open I came home early.” Tommy answered and smiled at his father.
“How did you do that?” his father asked him.“Why do you say to your teacher?”
“I told that I had a new baby sister and that I had to come home and help you.That was all!”
“But your mother has had twins,” his father said,“a boy and a girl.You’ve got a baby sister and a baby brother.” “Yes,I know,but don’t be foolish!Dad!” Tommy said.“I’m saving up my baby brother for next week!”

Answer 1

这不是你写的,一看就是外国的事情.
仍然有些错误：
1 he always plan to don’t go to school改为： he always planed not to go to school
2 so his school record is not very fine. 改为：so his score is not very good.
3 school times. －－> school time
4 than he did at school.--> in school
5 come home early at once--> back home
6 Why do you say to your teacher--> what did you say
很难起at开头的名字,很牵强：At home for any excuse:以任何借口回家,劝你换个作文.