按课后练习题目写了篇短文,麻烦大家看看,Yeah!Ilikeeggs.Egg’sshapeisellipseandcolorisyellow.Buyingeggsiseasy.Youcanbuyitalmostanyonesupermarket.Eggswascookedisveryeasy.Youonlyneedtobreakitupintoabowl

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按课后练习题目写了篇短文,麻烦大家看看,
Yeah!I like eggs.
Egg’s shape is ellipse and color is yellow.
Buying eggs is easy.You can buy it almost anyone super market.
Eggs was cooked is very easy.You only need to break it up into a bowl without shell.Then we can fire (我想说点火) and have pan put on fire.Ok,this time you should put a bit oil in pan.Wait a minute we put eggs in pan.After 5 minutes,eggs are finished.Oh!I forget to say,you must put a little slat and shallot in pan,Otherwise This egg is unedible.Haw-haw,In China It was called hebaodan(荷包蛋).
Yeah,that is very great.If you don’t believe,you can taste it yourself.I promise you must fell very delicious.
The scientist often said.Everyone had better eat an egg everyday at least.It’s importance,especially to growing up children.
You looked it.Eggs are too good to not have it everyday.
Ps：把什么倒如锅中应该可以用put in吧.除了put in 还可以用什么,fall in 行么?
按课后练习题目写了篇短文,麻烦大家看看,因为刚学着写,最好能简单说下那里错了.最后的最佳答案大家投票吧.以票数最多为准.虽然我很想给每人分.但没法子.只能选一个.还望没选到的朋友见谅.
我还是按照投票方式来选吧。
因为我上次选了一个，被很多人骂说最佳答案不好。我不敢在自己选了。：（
我个人最喜欢UWontKnow 所以的票投给他了。
但投票只能选择2－3个，我就按照写的字数多的了。请没选的原谅我。

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存在的问题还不少 :)我不算"专业"人士,帮你看了看,如下:Yeah!I like eggs.The shape of an[注意不要用定冠词the] egg is oval and the color is yellow.Eggs are familiar food.You can find them almost in any sup...