修改英语作文是看图写日志的,就是说一个女孩骑自行车回家,（下雨天）,从自行车上摔下来了,一个警察看见,并送她去医院,最后女孩向医生和警察说谢谢我写的作文,帮我看看那里语法什么的

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修改英语作文
是看图写日志的,就是说一个女孩骑自行车回家,（下雨天）,从自行车上摔下来了,一个警察看见,并送她去医院,最后女孩向医生和警察说谢谢
我写的作文,帮我看看那里语法什么的有错误,如果有什么句子加上去,更好.
It was rain had yesterday.Rose went home by bike.Suddenly,she fall off her bike.She leg was badly hurt.The policeman saw her and helped her.He stop a taxi to go hospital nearly.The doctor was carefully looked over.After,she was fine.Rose said"Thank" to the doctor and policeman.

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It was rainning,Rose went home by bike.Suddenly,she fell off her bike.Her leg was badly hurt.A policeman saw her and helped her.He stopped a taxi and they went to the nearest hospital.The doctor examined her carefully and told her that she was fine.In the end,Rose said "Thank you" to the doctor and the policeman.