帮我纠正一下英文翻译原文：很高兴能够站在这里，向一直关心和鼓励我们的各位领导，培育我们成长、进步的各位老师，以及互相帮助、共同进步的同学们表示衷心的感谢和最诚挚的祝福

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帮我纠正一下英文翻译
原文：很高兴能够站在这里，向一直关心和鼓励我们的各位领导，培育我们成长、进步的各位老师，以及互相帮助、共同进步的同学们表示衷心的感谢和最诚挚的祝福——我祝愿大家在这阳光明媚的春日里每天都有好心情！
译文：I’m so glad to be here, and have a speech to my leaders, my teachers, and my classmates. I will give my best wishes to you. I hope you can have a good feeling in the shining spring days.
望给出修改建议。

Answer 1

Very glad to be here.不能用so，I罗嗦。
Now I give my hearty thanks and most sincere wishes to very leaders that care and encourage us all long,very theachers that foster us to grow up & advance, and classmates that help each other and make progress together.我加修饰使意思更准确。
I hope all of us have a good feeling in very sun-shining spring days.
原句中can多余，sun-shining 才是阳光明媚,建议用 the sun-shining spring day就是今天。