帮忙改下英语作文.怎么提高啊MynameisLihua,whoisavolunteeroftheyouthhostel.Ienjoytravelingverymuch.Asweknow,itispopulartohelpothersforfreewhenyouaretravellingintheInternation..Meanwhile,itisalsowelcomet

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帮忙改下英语作文.怎么提高啊
My name is Lihua ,who is a volunteer of the youth hostel.I enjoy traveling very much.
As we know ,it is popular to help others for free when you are travelling in the Internation..Meanwhile ,it is also welcome to make volunteer travel in china.
There are a lot of advantages.For instance ,the free accommodation not only can save money,but also help us understand the special culture .Ii is worth doing it.However ,it also has its own disadvantages.The condition of de living is not great .Due to the strange of the place,we may lose a sense of safeness.
IN my opinions,\x05we should do more volunteer travels.Excises as we need ,we should do more change to train ourselves.When we help others ,we can also learn much form it .
So come to join us!

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make volunteer travel in china ：volunteer---》volunteers
the free accommodation not only can save money：not only can the free accommodation save money 这样比较好,用倒装句
有一些单词拼写错误