这段翻译帮挑毛病此刻,必须深入一线终端市场拉动销售!企业可以采用高科技的管理方式管理客户,建立一套有效的客户管理系统,在开发新客户的同时,深入挖掘老客户的需求.集中优势力量提

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这段翻译帮挑毛病
此刻,必须深入一线终端市场拉动销售!企业可以采用高科技的管理方式管理客户,建立一套有效的客户管理系统,在开发新客户的同时,深入挖掘老客户的需求.集中优势力量提升重点客户的满意度是关键的关键
At this moment, a enterprise shall thoroughly go into front line of terminal market to boost sales! A enterprise can use high-tech management models in customer management. By establishing an effective system of customer management, enterprise shall get a grip on customer demand while develop new clients. It has been a significance to concentrate our advanced strength to win the important customers' approval.
2问题回答1个也好
1帮挑毛病
2不会说,老说该咋样（该干嘛）,比如用A enterprise shall do还是Enterprises shall do单数复数?或用别的说法?
By establishing an effective system of customer management, a enterprise shall 少个a
感谢解答，不写论文，早他妈和学校88了，网站翻译，网站里一篇介绍企业如何销售的文章

Answer 1

1.第一行：market 改为 marketing
第二行：把 management models 直接改为 methods,避免与后句重复
2.用 an enterprise 就行,这是文中会用到的写一点的方法.（你是不是要写论文啊?）