我想让大家评论我的一段英文翻译,望各位网友踊跃发言!多谢!AnunforgetfultripIwentChongQinginJuly22.Itisacitywhichwasbuiltnearmountains.SopeoplecallitMountainCity\.InChongQing,IwenttotheRedStoneCen

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我想让大家评论我的一段英文翻译,望各位网友踊跃发言!多谢!
An unforgetful trip
I went Chong Qing in July 22.It is a city which was built near mountains. So people call it Mountain City\. In Chong Qing,I went to the Red Stone Center, to see the places which the prisoners lived in the past. It is a terrible and awful trip. There are a lot of dogs, and soldiers with guns near the prisons. And most of the prisons are good, they didn't want to tell the bad people where the other people were. They lived in very small houses. No good food to eat, no good water to drink.They had only twenty minutes to stay out side per day but they still said nothing.
I think they are the heros in that century. I will follow their spirit.
我于7月22日抵达了重庆,它是一座依山而建的城市,因此得名为“山城”.在重庆,我去了红岩魂中心,参观了以前关押犯人的地方.那真是一次极其可怕的经历.那儿有许多的狗,还有许多带着枪的士兵在监狱周围巡逻,大部分的监狱设施都很好,他们不会告诉那些囚犯其他人住在哪儿.那些犯人住在很小的屋子里,没有像样的食物可以吃,也没有干净的水可以喝.每天他们只有二十分钟在外面放风的时间,并且在此期间,他们仍然不能作任何交谈.我想在那个年代他们都是英雄,我将会把他们的精神承袭下去.

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话说,我在重庆生活了十几年,都没去过那儿.