英语翻译原句：加强固定资产管理,提高固定资产的经济效益和使用效益也是提高企业经济效益的重要途径之一我翻译的：Itisalsooneofimportantapproachestoenhancetheeconomicbenefitofenterprisesthat

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英语翻译
原句：加强固定资产管理,提高固定资产的经济效益和使用效益也是提高企业经济效益的重要途径之一
我翻译的：It is also one of important approaches to enhance the economic benefit of enterprises that we strengthen fixed assets management and improve the economic and use benefit of electric power grid corporation.
我想把英文翻译中that后面的we去掉,但是却不知道应该如何改变strengthen和improve的形式,比如 that to strengthen xxxx或者 that strengthening xxxx,
如果这个句式就有问题,那么请写一个出来,

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两种答案吧 我觉得
it is also one of important ways to improve economic efficiency of enterprises To strengthen management of fixed assets and improve the fixed assets's economic benefits and using efficiency
it is also one of important ways to improve economic efficiency of enterprises that we try to strengthen management of fixed assets and improve the fixed assets's economic benefits and using efficiency