英语翻译任何旨在消除现存或潜在不符合的原因所采取的纠正措施和预防措施,应与该问题的严重性和伴随的影响相适应.我翻译成：the purpose is to eliminate the cause of the existing or potential nonconform

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英语翻译
任何旨在消除现存或潜在不符合的原因所采取的纠正措施和预防措施,应与该问题的严重性和伴随的影响相适应.
我翻译成：the purpose is to eliminate the cause of the existing or potential nonconformities which any corrective and preventive action taken,shall meet the seriousness and accompanying impact of the problem.这样可以吗?

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个人建议：
Any corrective and preventive action taken with a view to eliminating the causes of any existing or potential non-conformity shall be adequate to the seriousness and accompanying impacts of the problem.
用词都还蛮好的,就是句子结构稍微改一下