英语大神有木有,帮我把这篇作文升华下撒Diffrentpeoplehavediffrenthobbies.Ihavealotofhobbieslikereadingbooks.watchingmoviesandsoon.Icangetlotsofknowledgefrombooks.soilikereadingbooksverymuchAndIcanfind

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英语大神有木有,帮我把这篇作文升华下撒
Diffrent people have diffrent hobbies.I have a lot of hobbies like reading books.watching movies and so on.I can get lots of knowledge from books.so i like reading books very much And I can find more interesting things .So I like reading diffrent kinds of books.I also like watching movies.I usually watch movies in my free time and it makes me happy.I think watching movies and reading books are more interesting than any hobbies.My hobbies make my life become more and more colorful

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Diffrent people have diffrent hobbies.For example（比如),I have a lot of hobbies ,like reading books.,watching movies and writing journals(排比句一般用三个吧,不知道你爱好是什么就随便写了） ..so i like reading books very much ,and I can find more interesting things from reading .and I can also canenlarge my knowledge from books.So I like reading diffrent kinds of books.I also like watching movies.I usually watch movies in my free time ,it makes me happy.I think watching movies and reading books are more the best hobbies in the world.My hobbies rich my life and make me never feels bored.The most of all,it makes me become more smarter and knows even more.I love my hobbies.
这样可以吗?