越来越多的环境污染给我们的地球造成了太重的负担．请以此为出发点，以自己的视觉写一篇文章，号召人们来共同保护地球、保护我们人类的家园．要求：1．行文流畅，观

Question

越来越多的环境污染给我们的地球造成了太重的负担．请以此为出发点，以自己的视觉写一篇文章，号召人们来共同保护地球、保护我们人类的家园．

要求：

1．行文流畅，观点鲜明；

2．文章要有深度，有思想，内容要丰富；

3．词数150～200个左右．

Answer 1

答案：
解析：
例文： The Earth is Our Homeland 　　Long long ago our earth was very beautiful．The earth was covered with lots of trees．All kinds of plants and animals lived happily everyday． 　　But now the earth is getting worse and worse．People cut down the trees and kill① their friends－the animals．The dirty water from the factories were drained off everywhere．The air isn't as clean as it ever been．Of course there are too many people on the earth．There must be enough food for them．The earth is very tired． 　　Yet while lots of people love the earth．They are trying their best to do something② for the earth．They have talks or meetings in the public．They have planted more and more trees and want to make the world green again．The world will become better and better．The sky will become much bluer than before． 　　I think everyone should make a contribution to protecting the environment．The earth is our homeland． 修改： 　　①kill→killed　and连接对称部分． 　　②后加useful更能表达其含义．
点评：
　　本文作者有着新时代青少年所具有的忧患意识，通过描写，地球从开 始到现在所发生在其身上的灾难都深刻地表达出来．文章的内容较好，语言比较流畅，但也存有一定的语法错误．望今后在练习中注意改正．