麻烦谁能帮我写一篇包含许多数词的英文小短文?基数词,序数词两者兼备~出现5个以上请问我这篇短文有没有什么错啊？TheMayDayholidayiscoming.OurschoolwillorganizeaonedaytriptoPudongonMayfirst.

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麻烦谁能帮我写一篇包含许多数词的英文小短文?
基数词,序数词两者兼备~
出现5个以上
请问我这篇短文有没有什么错啊？
The May Day holiday is coming.Our school will organize a one day trip to Pudong on May first.Pudong is developing very quickly these years.This our the third time to visit there.There will be sixty-two students and teachers take part in it and it'll only cost fifty Yuan each.We're going to visit two wonderful places in Pudong.We are going to take the No.eleven bus there.So we must gather at the school gate at seven o'clock.Please be on time.

Answer 1

This our the third time ----It is our third time
There are sixty-two students 就好了.后面的成累赘了.
We are going to take the No.eleven bus ---We will take .
前面那句已经用了are going to,后面再用感觉重复,不好.
最后一句 把 gather 改成 meet