关于几个雅思英文句子的正确,请指教.请帮我审查以下句子的正确性,如果错误请指出.1.Even notable is that their parents went to great lengths to help them to apply a good school.2.They deeply believed that only by learnin

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关于几个雅思英文句子的正确,请指教.
请帮我审查以下句子的正确性,如果错误请指出.
1.Even notable is that their parents went to great lengths to help them to apply a good school.
2.They deeply believed that only by learning in the university could they be more accessable to the promising future.
3.That is indeed a theory to which many people subscribe.
4.The other side of coin has voiced strong opposition saying that..
5.Not only could it teach children the practical and theoretical knowledge that is widely used in the workplace but also make you more sociable.
请注明哪里出错了!

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看来慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作搞死了不少人.
1.Even notable is that their parents went to great lengths to help them to apply a good school.
哥们你这第一句想说啥来着呢.你要硬说语法上有没有错,那的确没有错,但是怎么看怎么别扭.
2.They deeply believed that only by learning in the university could they be more accessable to the promising future.
单词拼写,accessible才对.
3.That is indeed a theory to which many people subscribe.
没错.
4.The other side of coin has voiced strong opposition saying that.
没错,不过这句话也太牛逼了,别告诉我是你写的.估计清朝的时候就没人这么写了.我猜吧,考试如果出现这个句子,是个人都知道是模板.
5.Not only could it teach children the practical and theoretical knowledge that is widely used in the workplace but also make you more sociable.
语法上一定没错,不过整个句子头重脚轻,读起来十分不爽.not only...but also...可以用,不过前后总该对称或者头轻脚重才好.
可惜现在youtube不能看了,当年robert lewis在上面发的雅思写作示范才是雅思写作的经典教材啊.多看看剑桥后面的范文吧,凑字数一定不是乱填词,雅思写作不求深刻,只求合理.切记切记.