一篇英语日记,帮忙看下Mondaythisweek,IgotoacceptaninterviewfromLenovo.Igetthereontime.AHR'sgirlleadmetotheinterviewer.Shequestionedmesomequestionsasbelow:1.Whydidyouleavetheproviouscompany?A:Theleadersofmy

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一篇英语日记,帮忙看下
Monday this week,I go to accept an interview from Lenovo.I get there on time.A HR's girl lead me to the interviewer.She questioned me some questions as below:
1.Why did you leave the provious company?
A:The leaders of my company want to list in the stock market, so there are some change in our company at the end of last year.Finally we are fired ,and I need to find new job.
2.what are your strengths?
I think my strengths are favourable learning ability and communication skills.
那位高手看下表达的是否正确,是否有比较好的表达方式,谢谢

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因为是发生过的事情,所以这篇日记的主要时态应该是一般过去时,以下供参考：
This Monday I went to an intervien in Lenovo.I got there on time.A HR girl led me to the interviewer.She asked me some questions as below:
1.why did you leave the previous(这个单词你没写对) company?
A:The leaders of my previous company wanted to apply for listed company,so there were some changes in our previous compnay at the end of last year.Finally we were fired.
2.What are you strengths?
A:My strengths are:I am a fast learner and I have exellent communication skills.