麻烦帮我改一下英语演讲稿Helloeveryone.TodayIwanttotalkaboutmyfavoritejob.ThanIhaveaquestion,doyouknowthe1orthe2?Yeah,soIwanttobeastar,asinger.Butmymomsays“Don’tbeasinger,it’snotonlybadan

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麻烦帮我改一下英语演讲稿
Hello everyone .Today I want to talk about my favorite job. Than I have a question, do you know the 1 or the 2? Yeah, so I want to be a star, a singer. But my mom says “Don’t be a singer, it’s not only bad and also difficult!” .But I want to be a singer, why? First 他能带给我许多财富，in my twenties ,I will buy a villa of my own. Second I can 用歌声带给人们快乐. Third I also can have 许多粉丝.All in all, 我们在20年后再说吧！

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hi everyone, today i would like to share my favorite job with all of you. i have a question, that is do any one of you know the 1 or the 2 (这个问句没看懂)? yeah, i wanna be a star, to be more accurate, i want to be a singer. my mom says "don't be a singer, because it not only has a bad name, but also hard to get." but i still wanna do it, why? firstly, this job will make me wealthy, so in my twenties i can buy a villa for myself. Secondly, i love to bring happiness to everyone. i can hardly spread warm to most of the world without being famous. Last but not the least, i could have many fans. I like to struggle to achieve my dream, though many difficulties will I meet. but, 20 years later, you will witness my success, thanks for all of you.