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上星期五晚上,你的邻居李娜在救人时被车撞到,导致右腿骨折,但事后她并不后悔。请你就以上事件用英语写一篇100-120词的短文,内容包括:1.李娜的事迹;2.你对见义勇为的看法

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上星期五晚上,你的邻居李娜在救人时被车撞到,导致右腿骨折,但事后她并不后悔。请你就以上事件用英语写一篇100-120词的短文,内容包括:
1. 李娜的事迹;
2. 你对见义勇为的看法
参考词汇:fracture (使。。。骨折) heroic acts
Driving home last Friday evening my neighbor Li Na saw a young woman lying in the middle of the road with her head and body full of blood obviously knocked down by a passing car.

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Driving home last Friday evening my neighbor Li Na saw a young woman lying in the middle of the road with her head and body full of blood obviously knocked down by a passing car.She looked around noticing there was no one helping the unconscious woman.  Without a second thought she walked towards the woman.Just as she was busy with the woman a car came to her at fast speed. She pushed away the woman just in time but had no time to run for herself. Unfortunately she was knocked down by the car and had her leg fractured. The car driver took her and the woman immediately to the hospital.After the accident I went to the hospital to visit her. I asked her how she felt and she said she didn't regret what she did.Li Na's heroic acts eventually saved the woman. It occours to me that there are still lots of good people around the world. We are expected to learn from them by helping others in need . Only in this way can we make our world a better place to live in. 解析
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这是一篇提纲类书面表达,题目给出了话题和要点,有两个要点,但是不是很具体,考生要根据要点进行拓展发挥,不能有遗漏,内容一定要充实,这就要求增加了难度。在写作的过程中,要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,如强调句,倒装句等,让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如:First,second, Besides What’s more等,让文章看起来很有条理,也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦,力求简洁。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁,运用了一些词组和好的句子:Be busy with忙于, at fast speed快速,in time及时, knocked down 撞倒,had her leg fractured腿骨折. in need有需要, She looked around noticing there was no one helping the unconscious woman. I asked her how she felt and she said she didn't regret what she did.这句话用了宾语从句, It occours to me that there are still lots of good people around the world. 这句话用了固定句型, Only in this way can we make our world a better place to live in.这句话用了倒装句。
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考查提纲类书面表达
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