求老师解答：书面表达(满分30分)书面表达(满分30分)假如你叫李华.四年前,你还是高三年级的一名学生,你学习成绩优异,但家境贫困,无力承担进入大学学习的费用.但你却有幸成为当地"希望

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求老师解答：书面表达(满分30分)

书面表达(满分30分)
假如你叫李华.四年前,你还是高三年级的一名学生,你学习成绩优异,但家境贫困,无力承担进入大学学习的费用.但你却有幸成为当地"希望工程"的资助对象,顺利被一所重点大学录取.现在,请你给该机构的负责人Kate女士写一封感谢信.信的内容包括:
1.目前的生活和学习情况；
2．大学毕业后的人生方向；
3．表达感激之情.
注意:1.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数；
2．应包括以上要点,可适当发挥；
3．词数不少于100.

Dear Ms Kate,
     I'm Li Hua.Four years ago,I received your letter and schooling fees.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version :
Dear _ Ms _ Kate,
     I'm _ Li _ Hua. _ Four _ years _ ago, _ I _ received _ your _ letter _ and _ schooling _ fees. I'm very grateful for your kindness and generosity.
     But for your help, I couldn't enjoy a wonderful college life in the beautiful campus right now. I've made a  lot of  friends here. Moreover, I am studying hard so as to acquire an abundant  knowledge of  English,
which is my major. In fact, I'm making progress each day. Only in this way can I learn more and use what I've  known to help those in  need as well.  Besides, I'm determined  to go back to my  hometown after
graduation  and devote  myself  to building my  hometown, to make it  more  prosperous and  beautiful.
     Words seem to fail me when I try once more to express my thanks to you,  and  I'll keep my promise
and not let you down.
Yours _ sincerely,
Li _ Hua