这句英文有错吗?如果50便士不拿来换糖吃,则可以放在储蓄罐里叮当响上好几月.但是能把储蓄罐装满的只有屈指可数的几个特别节俭的孩子.对大部分孩子来说,用50便士来买一大块好的巧克力,

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这句英文有错吗?
如果50便士不拿来换糖吃,则可以放在储蓄罐里叮当响上好几月.但是能把储蓄罐装满的只有屈指可数的几个特别节俭的孩子.对大部分孩子来说,用50便士来买一大块好的巧克力,是算不了什么的.Fifty penny can be remained in piggy bank for serval months,if don’t use it to buy sugar.Just a few thrifty children can fill the piggy bank with money.To most children,to buy a big block of superior chocolate with fitity penny is normal
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Fifty penny can be remained in piggy bank for serval months,if （缺主语 这里+they ）don’t use it to buy sugar.Just a（a去掉 这里是表否定含义） few thrifty children can fill the piggy bank with money.To(For对于 ) most children,to buy a big block of superior chocolate with fitity penny is normal
改完的：Fifty penny can be remained in piggy bank for serval months,if they don’t use it to buy sugar.Just few thrifty children can fill the piggy bank with money.For most children,to buy a big block of superior chocolate with fitity penny is normal