这个是我找淘宝上代写英语的帮我写的作业,麻烦帮看看写得怎么样Withthedevelopmentoftheeconomy,Chinesepeopleseemtobetoobusytoreadbooks.Asthestatisticsindicates,Chinesepeoplereadonly0.7bookperyearonave

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这个是我找淘宝上代写英语的帮我写的作业,麻烦帮看看写得怎么样
With the development of the economy,Chinese people seem to be too busy to read books.As the statistics indicates,Chinese people read only 0.7 book per year on average,which falls far behind South Korea and Japanese,7 books and 40 books,respectively.
\x09To begin with,most Chinese people have to rush about every day foe living.Besides,people have more choices in the way to get information.With the development of social media and the Internet,people can acquire information in more convenient ways,such as TV or the Internet.Last but not the least,the mentality of Chinese people seems to be blundering in the rapid developing society.It is understandable that few people want to read books with a blundering mentality.
\x09In my opinion,the reading situation of Chinese people is not normal and should attract enough attention.I suggest that more people cultivate the hobby of reading.Meanwhile,the government should encourage people to read more and provide relevant platform for the people.

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不错,达到了大学英语写作的水平.但是最好要自己写啊,那样才能锻炼自己.以后出去工作了可要自己扛的啊,现在要提高自己.