谁能帮我修改一下这封英语邮件,Ms.***Ireallyappreciatethatyouletmeenrollat***UniversityinSpring.IhavesentthescannedpaperofmyIELTSscoreasattachmentinthise-mail.ButtheproblemisthatIprobablycannotarriveat

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谁能帮我修改一下这封英语邮件,
Ms.***
I really appreciate that you let me enroll at *** University in Spring.I have sent the scanned paper of my IELTS score as attachment in this e-mail.
But the problem is that I probably can not arrive at Miami University tomorrow.Is that ok if I arrive on Thursday or Friday?And since *** University is in a town,so I must get a flight to the Cincinati Airport.I am wondering that your offer pick-up service or not.
In addition,can you give me some directions for paying tuition.
I look forward to study at ***.Thanks a lot for your help.

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Ms.***I really appreciate that you enroll me as a student of *** University in spring of 2010.The scanned paper of my IELTS scores has been scanned and attached to this e-mail.But I'm afraid there's s...