假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear editor，
My English teacher has been collecting opinions on the reform which the English test will be removed from China's college Entrance examination by 2020and tests will be holding several times a year．And opinions are different．
Some students are for it．They think this reform can reduce our study pressure and change China's once-in-a-lifetime exams system．What's more，they can spend much time on the subjects that they are interested in．
However，some students argue a reform wouldn't reduce the students'burden of learning English，because of schools may reduce English classes and not being strict with English teachers．If so，their parents may ask them to attend the training class outside the school．Not only they spend more money and also it may become a burden．
Yours，
Chen Hao．

Answer 1

Dear editor，
My English teacher has been collecting opinions on the reform which the English test will be removed from China's college Entrance examination by 2020and tests will be holding several times a year．And opinions are different．
Some students are for it．They think this reform can reduce our study pressure and change China's once-in-a-lifetime exams system．What's more，they can spend much time on the subjects that they are interested in．
However，some students argue a reform wouldn't reduce the students'burden of learning English，because of schools may reduce English classes and not being strict with English teachers．If so，their parents may ask them to attend the training class outside the school．Not only∧they spend more money and also it may become a burden．
Yours，
Chen Hao．
详
1．which改为that；考查名词性从句，此处是reform的同位语从句，which不能用作同位语从句的连接词，故用that在此处用作连词．2．holding改为held；考查被动语态，此处主语tests与动词hold是被动关系，故用过去分词held构成被动语态．
3．our改为their；考查形容词性物主代词，此处物主代词应该与句子主语they保持一致，故用their．
4．exams改为exam；考查名词作定语，英语中名词作定语时一般用单数形式．
5．many改为more；考查比较级，此处指的是花费更多的时间在自己喜欢的科目上，含有比较之意，故用形容词比较级作定语．
6．a改为the；考查冠词，此处特指的是取消英语这次改革，故用定冠词．
8．去掉because后面的of；考查介词，of是介词，because of后面接名词性短语，because后面接从句，本句中schools may reduce English classes…是一个从句，故把of去掉．
8．being改为be；考查并列成分，此处be和前文reduce为并列谓语，may是情态动词，后面实意动词用原形．
9．they前面加will；考查倒装句，not only 位于句首，句子要用半倒装，句子中描述的是将来动作，故用一般将来时态，所以在they前面加will．
10．and改为but；考查固定短语，此处为not only…but also固定结构，意为"不仅…而且…"．