我的第2篇英文日记,比较幼稚请大家帮我指正错误!itismondaytodayanditiscloudyday!Iwokeupat5clockthismorning,butididnotgetupimmediately!Ilaidonbedforonehourandcouldnotsleepagain!Ithoughtalotofthin

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我的第2篇英文日记,比较幼稚 请大家帮我指正错误!
it is monday today and it is cloudy day!
I woke up at 5 clock this morning,but i did not get up immediately!
I laid on bed for one hour and could not sleep again!
I thought a lot of things,which include some unhappy things,
sad memories,and something about my future!
I feel not very good!
it was six clock when i got up,outside of the window was rainning!I had breakfast in low spirits
i feel lose about my life,I don‘t know what i can do in the
future!
After a while,i continue to read my english book!
maybe,it is the only things that i should do now!
就写这些了
一定又有很多语法问题

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改过的地方被我用“【】”标记了,应该能看懂吧?
【It】 【was】【Monday】 today and it 【was】 【cloudy】!
I woke up at 5 【o'clock】 this morning,but i did not get up immediately!
I 【stayed in bed】 for one hour and could not sleep again!
I thought 【for】a lot of things,which 【included】some unhappy things,【such as】sad memories,and something about my future!
I 【didn't feel】 very good!
【It】 was six clock when 【I】 got up,【outside】 the window was rainning!I had breakfast in low spirits.【I felt lost】 about my life,I 【didn't】 know what 【I should】 do in the future!
After a while,【I continued】 to read my 【English】 book!
【Maybe】,it 【was】 the only 【thing】 that 【I】 should do 【at that moment】!