求英语大神修改一段英语!介绍一个人的!明天英语课老师让介绍一个人初步写了一下不知道对不对啊!求修改.HeisWuYifan.HisEnglishnameisKRIS.HewasborninGuangzhou.HewasborninNovember6,1990.Attheageo

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求英语大神修改一段英语!介绍一个人的!
明天英语课老师让介绍一个人初步写了一下不知道对不对啊!求修改.He is Wu Yifan.His English name is KRIS.He was born in Guangzhou.He was born in November 6,1990.At the age of ten he went to canada.He is now twenty-four years old.He is a member of the EXO.Is the leader of the EXO-M.He knows four languages.His specialty is rap,basketball,lyricist and drum.He likes reading,sleeping,playing basketball,travel,lyrics.He likes blue and black.He loved to eat meat.He is very tall.He was very handsome.I like him very much.翻译是他是吴亦凡.他的英文名字是KRIS.他出生在广州.他1990年11月6日出生.十岁时他到了加拿大.他现在二十四岁.他是EXO的成员.也是EXO-M的领袖.他会四种语言.他的特长是rap、篮球、作词和架子鼓.他喜欢读书、睡觉、打篮球、旅行、作词.他喜欢蓝色和黑色.他很爱吃肉.他很高.他很帅.我很喜欢他.

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不是knows 是he can speak. travel和lyricist中间加连接词and用名词所以是traveling、lyrics不好,改write poemsg过去时不需要改成like doing和is very handsomehe is the leader⋯…⋯不能没有主语...