修改英语演讲稿Goodmorningeveryone!Todaymytopicisabout“BigDianDianKingdom”（大不颠颠王国）,whichisconsistsofsevencartoonist.TheyareNiuHonghong（牛轰轰）,WuQiongqiong（吴琼琼）,XiaDora（夏Dora）,Xiao

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Good morning everyone!Today my topic is about “Big Dian Dian Kingdom”（大不颠颠王国）,which is consists of seven cartoonist .They are Niu Honghong（牛轰轰）,Wu Qiongqiong（吴琼琼）,Xia Dora（夏Dora）,Xiao Yinyin（小茵茵）,Jin Sili（谨斯里）,Guo Site（郭斯特）and Great Anny（伟大的安妮）.I like Jin Sili’s painting style very much.I think the characters in his draw is very cute and it give us a lot of positive energy.Even so,I like Anny best in them.It is not only because I like her paint ,but also she is a sunny girl.She always brings us a lot of happiness and let me know how meaningful the life is.What’s more,Anny was born in Guangdong and graduated from the Guangdong University of Foreign Studies in 2014 that make me feel she is very close to us.On the other hand,I like her also because she has a wonderful voice and she sings well.I want to share two songs to you.The first song was sung by her with her boyfriend and the second song is that she sang alone.That’s all,thankyou!
以上都是我自己写的,我英语水平一般般,可能会有些地方用词不恰当、语法不对等等.0v0

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修改一些语法错误：Good morning everyone!Today my topic is about “Big Dian Dian Kingdom”（大不颠颠王国）,which consists of seven cartoonists .They are Niu Honghong（牛轰轰）,Wu Qiongqiong（吴琼琼）,Xia Dora（夏Dora）,Xiao Yinyin（小茵茵）,Jin Sili（谨斯里）,Guo Site（郭斯特）and Great Anny（伟大的安妮）.I like Jin Sili’s painting style very much.I think the characters in his draw is very cute and it gives us a lot of positive energy.Even so,I like Anny best among them.It is not only because I like her paint ,but also she is a sunny girl.She always brings us a lot of happiness and lets me know how meaningful life is.What’s more,Anny was born in Guangdong and graduated from the Guangdong University of Foreign Studies in 2014 that makes me feel she is very close to us.On the other hand,I like her also because she has a wonderful voice and she sings well.I want to share two songs with you.The first song is sung by her with her boyfriend and the second song is by her alone.That’s all,thankyou!