求大神们看看我的英语作文,正确不?Intheinterestingstory,themonkey’spawisverymagi-cal.Itcanbringpeoplethreewishes,butthepeoplehavetolosesomething.Familyaf-fectionsandmoney,Ithinkfamilyaffectionsisveryim-po

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求大神们看看我的英语作文,正确不?
In the interesting story,the monkey’s paw is very magi- cal.It can bring people three wishes,but the people have to lose something.Family af- fections and money,I think family affections is very im- portant.We can’t give up fa- mily affections for money.And as a people,we can’t be greedy!If you still greedy,then you’ll meet some bad things!
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I think family affections is very im- portant.
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