大家帮忙看看这句话有没有语病,我怎么看着这么别扭呢?Theweatherisgettingcoolerup,feelingmoreandbetter

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大家帮忙看看这句话有没有语病,我怎么看着这么别扭呢?
The weather is getting cooler up,feeling more and better

Answer 1

1.The weather is geting cooler. up在这里不对,可以说 the tempreture is getting up/down.
2. feeling more and better 的逻辑主语是“the weather”,因此肯定不对.不知想表达什么意思,是说“我感觉越来越好吗?”可以说：
The weather is getting cooler, which makes me feel better and better.