短文改错 It is reported,some needy students receive financial support from some kind people butIt is reported ,some needy students receive financial support from some kind people but never express our thanks .Personally,I think they are wrong.Tho

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短文改错 It is reported,some needy students receive financial support from some kind people but
It is reported ,some needy students receive financial support from some kind people but never express our thanks .Personally,I think they are wrong.
Though the helpers didn't expect any reward in return ,but it's necessary and good manner to say "thank you".Besides ,it is a basic social skill express ourselves in modern society.Maybe some of them do feel thankfully.It is only because they are afraid of being looked down upon which they remain silent.But I just want to say that being poor for a moment dosen't mean you will be poor forever.

Answer 1

第一句的our改为their.
第二段第一句加上a ,a good manner.
第二句加上to,to express
倒数第二句which改成that.
最后一句的moment改成while.
谨供参考.