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英文简历修改·Experience2007/07--2007/08：ShanghaijiayangS&Tcompany|TeleSalesHeavyMachinenary|CompanySize:20-99|1000-2000RMB/MonthContactourclientsandcallthembyphoneorface-to-face,meanwhile,introduceourproductstothe
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英文简历修改
·Experience
2007/07 -- 2007/08：Shanghai jiayang S&T company | Tele Sales
Heavy Machinenary | Company Size:20-99 | 1000-2000RMB/Month
Contact our clients and call them by phone or face-to-face,meanwhile,introduce our products to them and keep this ralationship no matter they book order or not.
·English and Computer Abilities
Have a good command of both spoken and written English.Passed CET-4 ,CET-6,BEC(v).Intermediate Interpretation
Familiar with computer skills,such as Word,Excel ,PowerPoint and so on.
·Extra-curriculum Activities
Organize several activities of the college,such as welcome parties,climbing mountains,etc.Take part in the activities in the campus actively.Take part-time jobs after study,take family teacher and market investigator for example.Pay close attention to public welfare establishment,like charity sale,contribution and so on .
·Character
As a person who is passionate,open and clear,hardworking,discreet as I am,efficient teamwork is what I am good at as well.
I hope you would like to give me an opportunity to express myself in your corporation.
Thank you!
麻烦帮我看看里面的语法错误，以及动词的用法 哪里需要分词结构等等
·Experience
2007/07 -- 2007/08：Shanghai jiayang S&T company | Tele Sales
Heavy Machinenary | Company Size:20-99 | 1000-2000RMB/Month
Contact our clients and call them by phone or face-to-face,meanwhile,introduce our products to them and keep this ralationship no matter they book order or not.
·English and Computer Abilities
Have a good command of both spoken and written English.Passed CET-4 ,CET-6,BEC(v).Intermediate Interpretation
Familiar with computer skills,such as Word,Excel ,PowerPoint and so on.
·Extra-curriculum Activities
Organize several activities of the college,such as welcome parties,climbing mountains,etc.Take part in the activities in the campus actively.Take part-time jobs after study,take family teacher and market investigator for example.Pay close attention to public welfare establishment,like charity sale,contribution and so on .
·Character
As a person who is passionate,open and clear,hardworking,discreet as I am,efficient teamwork is what I am good at as well.
I hope you would like to give me an opportunity to express myself in your corporation.
Thank you!
麻烦帮我看看里面的语法错误，以及动词的用法 哪里需要分词结构等等
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根据你的大体意思稍微改动了一些语法,也变动了一些不太通顺的句子.不敢保证完全无误,但是希望能帮上你!
Experience
2007/07 -- 2007/08：Shanghai jiayang S&T company | Tele Sales
Heavy Machinenary | Company Size:20-99 | 1000-2000RMB/Month
I contact our clients by phone calls or face-to-face,and introduce our products to them.Then I will keep this ralationship no matter they book orders or not.
·English and Computer Abilities
I have a good command of both spoken and written English.I have passed CET-4 ,CET-6,BEC(v).Intermediate Interpretation
I am familiar with computer skills,such as Microsoft Word,Excel ,PowerPoint etc.
·Extra-curriculum Activities
I have organized several activities in the college,such as welcome parties,climbing mountains,etc.I have participated in the activities in the campus actively.I took part-time jobs after study,for example family teacher and market investigator.I paid close attention to public welfare establishment,like charity sale,contribution and so on .
·Character
I am a person who is passionate,open,clear,hardworking,and discreet.Efficient teamwork is also one of my merits.
I hope you would like to give me an opportunity to show my skills and talents in your corporation.
Thank you!
Experience
2007/07 -- 2007/08：Shanghai jiayang S&T company | Tele Sales
Heavy Machinenary | Company Size:20-99 | 1000-2000RMB/Month
I contact our clients by phone calls or face-to-face,and introduce our products to them.Then I will keep this ralationship no matter they book orders or not.
·English and Computer Abilities
I have a good command of both spoken and written English.I have passed CET-4 ,CET-6,BEC(v).Intermediate Interpretation
I am familiar with computer skills,such as Microsoft Word,Excel ,PowerPoint etc.
·Extra-curriculum Activities
I have organized several activities in the college,such as welcome parties,climbing mountains,etc.I have participated in the activities in the campus actively.I took part-time jobs after study,for example family teacher and market investigator.I paid close attention to public welfare establishment,like charity sale,contribution and so on .
·Character
I am a person who is passionate,open,clear,hardworking,and discreet.Efficient teamwork is also one of my merits.
I hope you would like to give me an opportunity to show my skills and talents in your corporation.
Thank you!
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