初二英语作文批改MynameisLiMing.Myhobbyiscollectingandmakingkites.Ithinkit'sberyinteresting.Ihavemorethan100kitesnow.Icollectandmakekitesattheageof9.Ihavesomedifferentkindsofkiteswithdifferentcolours.The

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初二英语作文批改
My name is Li Ming.My hobby is collecting and making kites .I think it's bery interesting.I have more than 100 kites now.I collect and make kites at the age of 9.I have some different kinds of kites with different colours.The biggest kite is 6 metres and the smallest one is as big as a book.I think hobbies is very important for us,because it can make you grow as a person,develop your interests and help you learn new skills. 麻烦看看有没有语法或是用词等错误,如有的话,请一一列举,帮忙改正!O(∩_∩)O谢谢

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My name is Li Ming.My hobby is collecting and making kites (像两个HOBBY啊).I think it's bery(very吧?打错了) interesting.I have more than 100 kites now.I collect and make kites at the age of 9(九岁用不用过去式?).I have some different kinds of kites with(in) different colours.The biggest kite is 6 metres and the smallest one is as big as a book.I think hobbies is(hobbies是复数,后面还有is,再后面还有it,还是用hobby吧) very important for us,because it can make you grow as a person,develop your interests and help you learn new skills.