英语高手前来解救Thedonationisusedfortripandotheractivitiesofthegroup.Thiscanbedoneinone'sownneighborhoodoranearbyneighborhood.YesterdayIspeakwithateenagerwhotookparttheprogram.Lastyearshehelpedtheoldmanw

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The donation is used for trip and other activities of the group.This can be done in one's own neighborhood or a nearby neighborhood.Yesterday I speak with a teenager who took part the program.Last year she helped the old man with housework twice a week and got 15dollars each time,that was spent on her piano lessons.In my opinion,it keeps the youth busily,and certainly benefits from the youth and the whole community.
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The donation was used for trips and other activities of the group.This could be done in one's own or a nearby neighborhood.Yesterday I spoke with a teenager who had taken part in the program.Last year she helped the old man with his housework twice a week and got 15 dollars each time.That was spent on her piano lessons' fee.In my opinion,it keeps the youth busy and certainly benefits the youth and the whole community.